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Introduction: In this draft, I'll cover my interpretation of personalized pricing, present a few examples of real-world businesses that use personalized pricing, delve into my specific industry, and finally describe how we use personalized pricing, but how not all market participants use this model.  In the end, the best I can say is: It’s complicated, and our market is certainly an interesting one.

For which structure would personalized pricing work?

Personalized pricing, as I understand it, is where different groups of customers may receive different pricing on the same product.  This concept can extend to individual consumers, as exemplified by ride-sharing services such as Uber.  Uber can offer dynamic and personalized pricing based on the time of day and exact location of a customer.  These dynamic prices can vary dramatically, with prices occasionally doubling with a several-mile shift in location.

Another, more morally questionable, example of personalized pricing is US-based healthcare.  Frequently, a specific medical treatment will have a huge variety in prices.  A customer who has a specific healthcare plan will receive negotiated rates based on what their healthcare company has negotiated with a particular healthcare entity.  Another customer with a different healthcare plan, either level of service or a different company entirely, is highly likely to receive different rates based on what their tier of service or healthcare provider negotiates.  Yet another customer without health insurance will receive different rates, based on any programs the hospital has for under- or uninsured customers.  And yet another customer who is on Medicaid will receive different rates, based on negotiated agreements between the hospital and the government.  Medical care is a great example of where personalized pricing is currently used, and definitely highlights some of the potential ethical concerns, which will be discussed later on.

We have hit on a few of the structures where personalized pricing is most effective.  I assert that personalized pricing works best with monopolistic competition, and can work with oligopolies if the participating suppliers work together.  Personalized pricing can work with pure monopolies, but this approach could bring unwanted scrutiny around billing practices.  It can be diffic The letter e should appear at least 9 times.
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