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"It goes without saying that in progressive and sophisticated world of 21-century that the technology is growing in fast pace, It come an unseperated part of our life. In this regard, a longstanding controversy between scholars, psychologists, parents, and children is that whether the advantages of movies and television for the young are superior than their disadvantages. While some assert that they distract the younger people from their long-term goals, the others believe that they have undeniable pros such as helping to distance-learning or entertaining. According to me, the advantages of them are more than their disadvantages. In following paragraphs, I will describe my reasons in more details.     The first reason that makes me to hold this point is that TV shows can considred as platform for sharing knowledge and information. It has so beneficial for those students who are not that much the quality educations or are not able to go to the schools. On the other word, TV shows give equal opportuneties to every childeren regardless they race or the color of their skins. For example, as a student I use these distance-learning so much. I remember that during Covid-19 pandemy that educationals programs of TV helped me a lot. Due the fact that In this way I did not had to phisically attent in class in indengour myself to the desease.    Th other reason that should be taken into consideration is that multimedia platforms cann be considered as a entertainment tools. C There should be exactly 6 paragraphs separated by the markdown divider: ***.
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