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NAME_1,

Thank you for reaching out and providing the details of our discussion. I'm thrilled to hear that you would like to continue working with us and offer your expertise in advising NAME_2's growth. Based on our conversation, I agree with the recommendations you've outlined.

Regarding the AFWERX Phase II, I'm onboard with the plan. Just to clarify, would you also be able to assist with reporting requirements as part of the fee?

In terms of finding customers and securing Letters of Intent (LOIs), I'm excited to get started on this initiative. As we discussed, I'm currently able to offer a commission for any sales generated through the introductions. Additionally, once we achieve a more positive cash flow situation, such as securing Phase II or raising additional venture capital, I would be open to discussing a fee arrangement as well.

I have copied NAME_3, your partner in these engagements, for visibility and coordination purposes.

Thank you again for your support and guidance. I look forward to continuing our collaboration.

Best regards,

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