NAME_1 smiled and said, "If this be the case then at least NAME_2 will live, why you want to be the murderer of my brother." I was alarmed at hearing this for NAME_1 is now converting me into a murderer. I said finally, "No I will not do this and went out of the room." On coming out I found my entire family including my father, mom, NAME_3 and her in-laws were standing out. NAME_3's mother-in-law came to me and fell on my feet and begged me to agree to this marriage for this will save her NAME_4, then I found NAME_3 on my feet too and then my father bent down, this was suddenly too emotional for me and a sudden thought came to my head that my family is begging me and expect me to marry NAME_2 and I suddenly felt a pang of guilt coming over me and then I realized that this is the least I can do for my family so after a lot of reluctance and emotions, I said, "Ok fine but I will not carry on this drama for more than one year." Thus began a complete new chapter of my life....

rewrite, improve flow of text, grammar and increase and improve dialogues Add stress words which are capitalized. Limit those stress words for less than 3 times.
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