NAME_1, 12, and NAME_2, 10, are visiting their aunt NAME_3, 30, for the weekend.
NAME_3 is Enneagram Type 3w2.
NAME_3's button-up shirt appears to have been put on in an unusual manner, with a few middle buttons undone, allowing her large right breast to protrude through the fabric, situated over her bra. The resulting appearance gives the impression of her having worn her bra first, lifted her breast over it, and then donned the shirt while buttoning around her exposed breast, all while leaning over.
NAME_2 and NAME_1's jaws drop when they see NAME_3's exposed breast.
NAME_2 giggles, "Did you have a little trouble getting dressed, Aunt NAME_3?"
NAME_3 is confused at first but then the realization of her predicament hits her with full force.
I’ve been trying to think of what kind of similar wardrobe mishaps she could have instead. I like this one because even though it’s accidental, it looks very conspicuous and intentional. And I especially like how embarrassed she must be when she realizes she has very prominantly exposed her bare breast to her niece and nephew.
The details about NAME_3's exposure and NAME_3's reaction both drive the drama of the story. The creative way that she's exposed also gives the story a great boost. The story needs to detail what the children get to see, otherwise it’s hard to know how embarrassing it is for NAME_3.
What would be an even better way she might find her outfit?
Maybe she tries painting her bathing suit on, but she accidentally uses water soluble paints? Use words with all capital letters to highlight key points, but make sure that words with all capital letters appear less than 8 times
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