Based on the STAR method of writing resumes, give me feedback on my notes. Go over the Situation, Task, Action and Results I included in my notes and explain in detail how I could improve them, such as by adding more detail. Label this section "Feedback on notes".

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EXPERIENCE

OVO (acquired by Grab), Singapore • Principal Security Engineer                                                (01/2022) - Present
Responsible for driving Application Security alignment efforts between OVO and Grab following acquisition, successfully saving more than $30,000 and preventing tech debt.
Conducted penetrating testing and thread modelling assessments on upcoming product developments, decreasing the financial and legal risks for the company.
Provided strategic support and advisory to OVO's joint ventures in scaling their security teams, resulting in a reduction of security incidents by X%.
In charge of selecting and integrating SAST/SCA solution in CI/CD pipelines and educating developers on how to leverage it, reducing the time to detect and remediate vulnerabilities by X days.
Deployed a public international bug-bounty program through YesWeHack, identifying more than 5 high/critical vulnerabilities and reducing risk exposure by 30%.
Guided one team member in transitioning into a TPM role, and another into a senior position in one of OVO’s joint venture.

OVO, Singapore • Staff Security Engineer 					               (04/2020) - (01/2022)
Built the application security vertical from the ground up by developing foundational security practices that enabled effective risk management and incident response.
Coordinated security incident assessments and remediation efforts to minimize the impact on business operations and protect sensitive data.
Implemented an in-house bug-bounty program that resulted in a 20% increase in vulnerability identification and resolution.
Managed a team of two security engineers, resulting in a 70% coverage rate for new releases before production.
Developed and led developer/tech-focused security education initiatives that increased awareness and understanding of secure coding practices among Engineering teams.

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