 proofread and summarize: I participated in several team projects, which helped me develop my collaboration and communication skills. Furthermore, I have experience presenting my research to both academic and industry audiences, which has helped me refine my presentation skills and build my confidence in communicating complex concepts to diverse groups. I’m confident that my background and experiences qualify me for the program and that I would be an asset to the community at the University. 
 My goal after graduating is to be a space engineer and researcher at an industry-leading company and give solutions to complex astronautics and space engineering issues. I aim to make meaningful contributions to the advancements of astronautics engineering and space studies and benefit humanity and its future. I enjoy finding new solutions to unique problems. The University's astronautics and space engineering graduate program will provide me with the tools and resources I need to achieve my goal. The university's world-leading research in astronautics and space engineering and strong industry links are important to me, as they provide the latest exciting innovations in the field. I am excited to contribute to a diverse academic and research environment. I would be honoured to collaborate with the university's brilliant faculty and other students to pursue my dream. 
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