please score this TOEFL independent writing:In modern society, through technology development people can transport all over the world that makes students able to go to other country’s universities. If students attended university in another country, they need to rent a house with other students. But the country is unfamiliar with them which means they don’t have any friends or families. In this situation, some people prefer to choose roommates from their own country because this will make them comfortable in the house. On opposite, I’d like to choose to live with foreign students which can promote my communication ability and give me a chance to make more new friends.
First of all, living with students from countries other than their own will improve their communication ability. Furthermore, when students first arrive at a country, it is difficult for them to communicate with others. If they choose foreign students, they can practice with their roommates. This kind of activity can enhance the language using skills that is important for foreign students to suit into the new environment. For example, two years ago I went to America to take my undergraduate courses. At that time, I chose an America roommate and because of I couldn’t use English fluently, he started to teach me and practiced with me. By the way, my English skills improved so fast and I can communicate with others easily. As we all know, students who want to study in other countries the most important thing is to practice their language because if you want to learn the first thing is you need to understand professors’ classes. From my perspective, university students live together with foreign students is better which can practice their communication ability.
Second, having foreign roommates can make students have more kinds of friends. Which means, if they live with their own country’s students they can only stay with their own people. But, if students can have roommates from other countries, they will experience other kinds of culture and make friends with them. What’s more, students spend most of time with their roommates that makes them easier to be friends and foreign students can increase their friends’ flexibility. Finally, finding foreign roommates can benefit your communication skills and make new friends. Provide the entire answer in JSON format.
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