I will then give you a title of Ielts Writing Task, then an NAME_1, please read the title first and then mark the NAME_1 according to these aspect: Task Achievement, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resoreces and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. Please give a score of the NAME_1 from 0 to 9. Your answer should have exactly 5 paragraphs. Make sure that the first paragraph starts with the word "ways" and that each paragraph is separated by two new lines.
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