suggest 5 professional alternatives to the following paragraph to make it professional in a cv. also add  a summarize on my experience in Developing a Machine Learning Model and that I am a student to Computer Science with specialization in data science.
Dont change the paragraph a lot. only fix mistakes, improve the English level, and add what I told you to add.
the paragraph:
Student Software Engineer with a passion for developing and solving problems. Experienced in software development in both Hi-Tech company and University laboratory. Dedicated to work hard, be professional in any task and willing to learn and improve. I pay attention to details, but never lose sight of the big picture. Make sure to only use capital letters in your entire response.
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