Rewrite the following story,  fix all spelling errors and grammatical mistakes and make it sound fluent
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NAME_1 was in the middle of enjoying her ‘me time’ on the couch.
It’s eleven o’clock in the night, and she was just lying there like a potato on her couch. It had been a long day for her, not that she’s complaining considering that she loved her job.
NAME_2 had been living her biggest dream at the moment.
She owned The Sweets Cakeshop on the corner of the peak road-Alvero City. It’s not a big fancy store, but it’s enough for a starter. The shop had been open for three months and based on all the previous income, and loyal customer, they could say that their store had quite done well in the city. NAME_1, with help from her sister NAME_3, had been working their best to build their business from the ground.
But when her phone was ringing, she’d never thought that it would be the greatest challenge in her life to come.
NAME_1 furrowed her eyebrows when she didn’t recognize the number and the screen only shows some short random number.
“Miss NAME_4?” said the voice on the other end.
“Yes, this is she..”
“I’m calling from The Stanton Hospital—”
The rest of the conversation became blurry in her ears, she just made it brief before changing her clothes and went to the hospital in hurry by the first cab she found on the road. Something happened to NAME_5 and they said she had to come right away.
~Is NAME_5 okay? What is happening?~ – She suddenly became very anxious, not to mention the sound of sirens that she heard not far from her.
The moment she got to the hospital, she ran to the front desk and asked about NAME_5.
“Yeah, I’m looking for my sister, NAME_3? I’m her younger sister, NAME_2.” She said between her panting.
“Room 520, I can take you there.” The nurse called her friend to cover up for her at the front desk.
“I-is she okay? I just got the call and rushed in here.” As they walked toward the room, NAME_1 noticed two officers were standing in the hallway.
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