Provide feedback on the quality of the thesis statement in this essay delimited by triple quotes: """Literacy Analysis of NAME_1's“Born a Crime” 
NAME_1's mom instilled in him the traits of a self-assured and sensible adult. Every choice, movement, and encounter that he made was a lesson. Every child makes errors as they grow up, and at times they commit the same mistake several times before learning the lesson. In his book Born a Crime, South African comedian NAME_1 recalls his boyhood during the country's transformation from apartheid, a white supremacist system of governance founded on forced labour and racial segregation. The connection between NAME_2 and his mother will be examined to see how the intricacies and constraints of that relationship shaped NAME_2's character and his vision of the world. 
NAME_3, NAME_4's mom, was distinct from the rest of her family; she constantly felt as though she did not belong. She desired something to love, cherish, and provide pleasure in her life. In the same way that NAME_4 was a problematic kid, so was his mother. “My mom was the problem child, a tomboy, stubborn, defiant. My NAME_5 had no idea how to raise her” (NAME_2 64). Attitude is passed along in the same way that genes are. His mother had a troubled childhood and always felt like an outsider. As for her parents, they did not have a lot either. 
The government seized their home and bulldozed the whole area to build a fancy, new white suburb, triumph. Triumph along with tens of thousands of other black people, my grandparents were forcibly relocated to Soweto, to a neighborhood called the Meadowlands (NAME_2 63). 
Since she grew up under limits imposed by her family and was compelled to labor as a youngster, she desired a different upbringing for NAME_4. She wanted to reveal to him the prospects and demonstrate that it is possible to move from nothing to anything. Before giving birth to NAME_4, she had nothing, and he was her whole world. She did not impose many restrictions on what he might do to have a happy and successful life. As a kind of rebellion against apartheid, NAME_3 opted to give birth to NAME_4 with a white and eventually raised him alone. She desired NAME_4 to be unrestricted in his movements, actions, and identities. NAME_3 provided him with the resources necessary to complete the task. She educated him on English as his first language and frequently read to him. 
NAME_4's upbringing was unlike that of the other children he was surrounded by. He never felt like he belonged anywhere, and his Avoid using the following keywords: area, thousand, relationship, grandparent
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