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Attached is draft report with the team comments. I have forwarded the report to IHA, and they will send their comments back on July 4th.  
In addition to the comments in the document, we have discussed the following concerns that we would like further clarifications on: Between bracket is our comments  

-	Based on precipitate outside under and exhaust vent  (This is the vent from the salt /Brine tank. The precipitate was salt residue from when we filled the salt tank. This was washed down to remove the salt residue) and a strong smell of chlorine, they are concerned there is a leak at the WTP (Weere are no leaks in our hypo system now there has been a few small leaks over time but have all been repaired. The smell can be attributed to a small amount of air from the blowers getting past the vent tube)..  They have noted potential Health and Safety concerns and recommended we look into the source of the odour ASAP.
-	A leak was observed on the thickener overflow pipe back to the lake at one of the Victaulic couplings (Not sure where he was looking but there is no leaking Victaulic coupling then nor is there one now).  The have recommended this leak get repaired ASAP.
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