I got 2 short poem about "person in wonder land." I want you to rate and tell me with one better. Here is the first one:
In Wonderland I met a soul
Lost and wandering, incomplete
With curious eyes and a heart whole
She roamed the paths, searching for a feat

She asked of me a simple phrase
To guide her through this foreign land
And I said, with a gentle gaze
"Embrace the wonders, take a stand"

For in this world of endless charm
There's much to see and much to feel
So let your spirit be your arm
And let your wonder guide your heels

And with a smile, she journeyed on
A traveler in this wonderland
And though her path was never gone
She found her way, with heart in hand.

Here is the second one:
Person in Wonderland, a fun place to be.
Where the world is fantastical, and you’re free to be.
A place where anything can happen, and you’ll never know what you’ll see.
With colors, shapes and whimsy in every space,
You’ll live a life of wonder and outlandish grace.

Where the air is alive with a playful breeze,
And the sky is painted with an endless tease.
There you’ll be free to dream and roam,
To explore and have a blast, and stay at home.

You’ll find a home in this land of whimsy,
Where the magic never fades, and the dreams are plenty.
Where the sun shines brighter, and the laughter is free,
And the trees dance in the wind like happy company.

So let’s explore, let’s create,
Let’s imagine and imagine a world that’s great.
With the wonders that we hold dear,
Let’s make the most of each day, it’s here, and stay here. Use words with all capital letters to highlight key points, but make sure that words with all capital letters appear less than 5 times
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