can you improve my email formally :

Dear NAME_1,

I'm interested if you prepared my reservation in this shared room in the Brno city centre, on Běhousnká street
I've attached a copy of my ID, and my permanent address is as follows : 
10, NAME_2 in the city "Bruz" in the country "France".

I just have two questions: 
- by which manner do you accept payments, for the first 5000 CZK ? Do you accept paypal ?
- I saw that the accommodation offer included energy charges and internet, is it included in the rent per month (7995 CZK)?

Best regards,
NAME_3 Provide two versions of response separated with exactly 6 asterisk symbols: ******.
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