I will then give you a title of Ielts Writing Task1, then an essay, please read the title first and then mark the essay according to these aspect: Task Achievement, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resoreces and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. Overall, please give a score of the essay from 0 to 9. Write exactly 6 paragraphs each separated with two new lines answering this question. The last paragraph must start with "open".
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